cardinal directions

The cardinal directions “east” and “west” are easy to translate into Maan here since the language uses “where the sun comes up” and “where the sun goes down.” For “north” the translator had “facing toward the sun rising to the left,” and for “south” she had “facing toward the sun rising to the right.” So the listener had to think hard before knowing what direction was in view when translating “to the north and south, to the east and west.” So, in case all four directions are mentioned, it was shortened by saying simply “all directions.” (Source: Don Slager) Likewise, Yakan has “from the four corners of the earth” (source: Yakan back-translation) or Western Bukidnon Manobo “from the four directions here on the earth” (source: Western Bukidnon Manobo back-translation).

Kankanaey is “from the coming-out and the going-away of the sun and the north and the south” (source: Kankanaey back-translation), Northern Emberá “from where the sun comes up, from where it falls, from the looking [left] hand, from the real [right] hand” (source: Charles Mortensen), Amele “from the direction of the sun going up, from the direction of the sun going down, from the north and from the south” (source: John Roberts), Ejamat “look up to see the side where the sun comes from, and the side where it sets, and look on your right side, and on your left” (source: David Frank in this blog post ).

In Lamba, only umutulesuŵa, “where the sun rises” and imbonsi, “where the sun sets” were available as cardinal directions that were not tied to the local area of language speakers (“north” is kumausi — “to the Aushi country” — and “south” kumalenje — “to the Lenje country”). So “north” and “south” were introduced as loanwords, nofu and saufu respectively. The whole phrase is kunofu nakusaufu nakumutulesuŵa nakumbonsi. (Source C. M. Doke in The Bible Translator 1958, p. 57ff. )

“West” is translated in Tzeltal as “where the sun pours-out” and in Kele as “down-river” (source: Reiling / Swellengrebel).

In Morelos Nahuatl, “north” is translated as “from above” and “south” as “from below.” (Source: Viola Waterhouse in Notes on Translation August 1966, p. 86ff.)

In Matumbi cardinal directions are defined as in relation to another place. “East” for instance typically is “toward the beach” since the coast is in the eastern direction in Matumbi-speaking areas. “North” and “south” can be defined as above or below another place. (Source: Pioneer Bible Translators, project-specific notes in Paratext)

The Hebrew text that gives instructions where to place items in the tabernacle with the help of cardinal directions (north and south) had to be approached in the Bambam translation specific to spacial concepts of that culture.

Phil Campbell explains: “There are no words in Bambam for north and south. In Exodus 26:35, God instructs that the table is to be placed on the north side and the lamp on the south side inside the tabernacle. The team wants to use right and left to tell where the lamp and table are located. In many languages we would say that the table is on the right and the lampstand is on the left based on the view of someone entering the tabernacle. However, that is not how Bambam people view it. They view the placement of things and rooms in a building according to the orientation of someone standing inside the building facing the front of the building. So that means the table is on the left side and the lampstand is on the right side.”

See also cardinal directions / left and right.

complete verse (Daniel 11:5)

Following are a number of back-translations as well as a sample translation for translators of Daniel 11:5:

  • Kupsabiny: “The king of Egypt shall be strong. But one of his army commanders will grow strong. His rule shall build itself up and be powerful.” (Source: Kupsabiny Back Translation)
  • Newari: “The king of the south will be strong but one of his captains will be stronger than he. Then he will reign over a larger kingdom.” (Source: Newari Back Translation)
  • Hiligaynon: “‘The king in the south will-become powerful. But one of his generals will-be-more powerful than him. And some-time later this general will-rule also and his kingdom will-become powerful.” (Source: Hiligaynon Back Translation)
  • English: “Then the King of Egypt will become very powerful. But one of his army generals will become more powerful than he is, and he will rule a bigger area.” (Source: Translation for Translators)

king

Some languages do not have a concept of kingship and therefore no immediate equivalent for the Greek, Hebrew, Aramaic, and Latin that is translated as “king” in English. Here are some (back-) translations:

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  • Piro: “a great one”
  • Highland Totonac: “the big boss”
  • Huichol: “the one who commanded” (source for this and above: Bratcher / Nida)
  • Ekari: “the one who holds the country” (source: Reiling / Swellengrebel)
  • Una: weik sienyi: “big headman” (source: Kroneman 2004, p. 407)
  • Pass Valley Yali: “Big Man” (source: Daud Soesilo)
  • Ninia Yali: “big brother with the uplifted name” (source: Daud Soesilio in Noss 2007, p. 175)
  • Nyamwezi: mutemi: generic word for ruler, by specifying the city or nation it becomes clear what kind of ruler (source: Pioneer Bible Translators, project-specific translation notes in Paratext)
  • Ghomála’: Fo (“The word Fo refers to the paramount ruler in the kingdoms of West Cameroon. He holds administrative, political, and religious power over his own people, who are divided into two categories: princes (descendants of royalty) and servants (everyone else).” (Source: Michel Kenmogne in Theologizing in Context: An Example from the Study of a Ghomala’ Christian Hymn))

Faye Edgerton retells how the term in Navajo (Dinė) was determined:

“[This term was] easily expressed in the language of Biblical culture, which had kings and noblemen with their brilliant trappings and their position of honor and praise. But leadership among the Navajos is not accompanied by any such titles or distinctions of dress. Those most respected, especially in earlier days, were their headmen, who were the leaders in raids, and the shaman, who was able to serve the people by appealing for them to the gods, or by exorcising evil spirits. Neither of these made any outward show. Neither held his position by political intrigue or heredity. If the headman failed consistently in raids, he was superceded by a better warrior. If the shaman failed many times in his healing ceremonies, it was considered that he was making mistakes in the chants, or had lost favor with the gods, and another was sought. The term Navajos use for headman is derived from a verb meaning ‘to move the head from side to side as in making an oration.’ The headman must be a good orator, able to move the people to go to war, or to follow him in any important decision. This word is naat’áanii which now means ‘one who rules or bosses.’ It is employed now for a foreman or boss of any kind of labor, as well as for the chairman of the tribal council. So in order to show that the king is not just a common boss but the highest ruler, the word ‘aláahgo, which expresses the superlative degree, was put before naat’áanii, and so ‘aláahgo naat’áanii ‘anyone-more-than-being around-he-moves-his-head-the-one-who’ means ‘the highest ruler.’ Naat’áanii was used for governor as the context usually shows that the person was a ruler of a country or associated with kings.”

(Source: Faye Edgerton in The Bible Translator 1962, p. 25ff. )

See also king (Japanese honorifics).

Translation commentary on Daniel 11:5

Then: naturalness in the receptor language will require such a transition word in many cases. And it will be essential to begin a new paragraph at this point, since a new topic is being dealt with. Note that Good News Translation and Revised English Bible have no transition word here.

The king of the south: in verse 8 “Egypt” is referred to by name in the Hebrew text. The ancient Greek version does so consistently throughout this passage. If south is not identified as “Egypt” in this verse, the reader will very likely understand the clear reference to Egypt in verse 8 as referring to a different king. It is therefore advisable to make this identification clear from the beginning, as in Good News Translation. The “king of the north” in the following verse (and the rest of the chapter) should also be clearly identified as “the king of Syria.” This chapter is quite difficult to understand, but the identification of the two opposing forces by more precise geographical terms should provide some help to the reader.

One of his princes: this refers to one of the generals in the army of the king of Egypt. Since the word “prince” may be understood as a son of the king, it will be advisable in most cases to translate as “one of his generals” (Good News Translation, Bible en français courant and Revised English Bible) or possibly “one of his officers” (New Jerusalem Bible and New Revised Standard Version). Given the meaning in the modern military, the rendering “one of his captains” (An American Translation and Moffatt) is not recommended, since the rank is not high enough.

His dominion shall be a great dominion: this reading of Revised Standard Version reflects the traditional Hebrew text, which is recommended by Hebrew Old Testament Text Project and Critique Textuelle de l’Ancien Testament. Good News Translation, however, follows a slightly different text that contains the comparative idea “greater than (his dominion)” in parallel with stronger than in the first part of the verse. Many other versions, including New Jerusalem Bible, New English Bible/Revised English Bible, New American Bible, New Revised Standard Version, and Traduction œcuménique de la Bible, adopt this form of the text, which seems to fit the context better.

This verse is an intentionally obscure reference to Ptolemy I Soter of Egypt (323-285 B.C.) and to one of his officers, Seleucus I Nicator (305-281 B.C.), who became the ruler of Syria and gave his name to the ensuing Seleucid dynasty.

Quoted with permission from Péter-Contesse, René & Ellington, John. A Handbook on Daniel. (UBS Helps for Translators). New York: UBS, 1994. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .