Following are a number of back-translations as well as a sample translation for translators of Psalm 31:13:
Chichewa Contempary Chichewa translation, 2002/2016:
“For I have heard bad talks of many people;
danger has surrounded me on every side;
they are plotting to contend against me,
to take my life.” (Source: Mawu a Mulungu mu Chichewa Chalero Back Translation)
Newari:
“I hear many rumors about me.
I am being frightened on every hand.
My enemies have set traps for me
and are trying to kill me.” (Source: Newari Back Translation)
Hiligaynon:
“I can-hear the whispering of many enemies.
Wherever I go I (am) afraid,
for they plan to-kill me.” (Source: Hiligaynon Back Translation)
Eastern Bru:
“I hear the sound of murmuring from many people. Fear is stalking all around me. They look for ways to kill me, thinking to do away with my breath.” (Source: Bru Back Translation)
Laarim:
“I hear many people who bring slander to me.
The fear appears too me in all ways.
My enemies plot,
they desire to kill me.” (Source: Laarim Back Translation)
Nyakyusa-Ngonde (back-translation into Swahili):
“Nasikia maneno ambayo wananisengenya,
vya kutiisha vimenizunguka pande zote.
Wanapanga kunitendea vibaya,
wanataka kuniua.” (Source: Nyakyusa Back Translation)
English:
“I have heard people slandering me, and they have caused me to become terrified.
My enemies are making plans in order to kill me.” (Source: Translation for Translators)
In line a the psalmist says only that he hears many people whispering; in the context it is clear that he is referring to enemies who are plotting against him. So New English Bible “whispering threats.” New International Version and New Jerusalem Bible have “slander,” which is possible but does not seem probable here.
In line bterror on every side! may be taken as what the many of line a are whispering; so, in different ways, New English Bible, Traduction œcuménique de la Bible, Biblia Dios Habla Hoy. This seems to fit the context of a siege. Or else it may be the psalmist’s own perception of his situation: he is surrounded by frightful enemies, who fill him with dread. The expression occurs frequently in Jeremiah (as in Jer 20.3, 10).
Lines c and d are parallel and nearly synonymous; line d makes clear what his enemies are planning to do, that is, to kill him.
Quoted with permission from Bratcher, Robert G. and Reyburn, William D. A Handbook on the Book of Psalms. (UBS Helps for Translators). New York: UBS, 1991. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .
John Wu Ching-hsiung (1899-1986) was a native of Ningbo, Zhejiang, a renowned jurist who studied in Europe and the United States, and served as a professor of law at Soochow University, as a judge and the Acting President of the Shanghai Provisional Court, and as the Vice President of the Commission for the Drafting of the Constitution of the Republic of China, before becoming the Minister of the Republic of China to the Holy See. Wu has written extensively, not only on law but also on Chinese philosophy, and has also written his autobiography, Beyond East and West, in English. Wu was a devout Catholic and had a personal relationship with Chiang Kai-shek (1887-1975). Wu began translating the the Psalms in 1938, and was encouraged by Chiang to translate the entire New Testament, which he corrected in his own handwriting. (…) John Wu Ching-hsiung’s translation of the Psalms (first draft in 1946, revised in 1975) was translated into Literary Chinese in the form of poetic rhyme, with attention paid to the style of writing. According to the content and mood of the different chapters of the original psalm, Wu chose Chinese poetic forms such as tetrameter, pentameter, heptameter [4, 5 or 7 syllables/Chinese characters per stanza], and the [less formal] Sao style, and sometimes more than two poetic forms were used in a single poem. (Source: Simon Wong)
John Wu Ching-hsiung himself talks about his celebrated and much-admired (though difficult-to-understand) translation in his aforementioned autobiography: (Click or tap here to see)
“Nothing could have been farther from my mind than to translate the Bible or any parts of it with a view to publishing it as an authorized version. I had rendered some of the Psalms into Chinese verse, but that was done as a part of my private devotion and as a literary hobby. When I was in Hongkong in 1938, I had come to know Madame H. H. Kung [Soong Ai-ling], and as she was deeply interested in the Bible, I gave her about a dozen pieces of my amateurish work just for her own enjoyment. What was my surprise when, the next time I saw her, she told me, “My sister [Soong Mei-ling] has written to say that the Generalissimo [Chiang Kai-shek] likes your translation of the Psalms very much, especially the first, the fifteenth, and the twenty-third, the Psalm of the Good Shepherd!”
“In the Autumn of 1940, when I was in Chungking, the Generalissimo invited me several times to lunch with him and expressed his appreciation of the few pieces that he had read. So I sent him some more. A few days later I received a letter from Madame Chiang [Soong Mei-ling], dated September 21, 1940, in which she said that they both liked my translation of the few Psalms I had sent them. ‘For many years,’ she wrote, ‘the Generalissimo has been wanting to have a really adequate and readable Wen-li (literary) translation of the Bible. He has never been able to find anyone who could undertake the matter.’ The letter ends up by saying that I should take up the job and that ‘the Generalissimo would gladly finance the undertaking of this work.’
“After some preliminary study of the commentaries, I started my work with the Psalms on January 6, 1943, the Feast of the Epiphany.
“I had three thousand years of Chinese literature to draw upon. The Chinese vocabulary for describing the beauties of nature is so rich that I seldom failed to find a word, a phrase, and sometimes even a whole line to fit the scene. But what makes such Psalms so unique is that they bring an intimate knowledge of the Creator to bear upon a loving observation of things of nature. I think one of the reasons why my translation is so well received by the Chinese scholars is that I have made the Psalms read like native poems written by a Chinese, who happens to be a Christian. Thus to my countrymen they are at once familiar and new — not so familiar as to be jejune, and not so new as to be bizarre. I did not publish it as a literal translation, but only as a paraphrase.
“To my greatest surprise, [my translation of the Psalms] sold like hot dogs. The popularity of that work was beyond my fondest dreams. Numberless papers and periodicals, irrespective of religion, published reviews too good to be true. I was very much tickled when I saw the opening verse of the first Psalm used as a headline on the front page of one of the non-religious dailies.”
A contemporary researcher (Lindblom 2021) mentions this about Wu’s translation: “Wu created a unique and personal work of sacred art that bears the imprint of his own admitted love and devotion, a landmark achievement comparable to Antoni Gaudi’s Basilica of the Sagrada Família in Barcelona, Spain. Although its use is still somewhat limited today, it continues to attract readers for the aforementioned qualities, and continues to be used in prayers and music by those who desire beauty and an authentic Chinese-sounding text that draws from China’s ancient traditions.”
The translation of Psalm 31 from the 1946 edition is in pentameter and the rhyme schemes are -u and -en (the 1946 edition did not have verse numbers either):
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