The interconfessional Chichewa translation (publ. 1999) uses the ideophone ngundangunda to positions like lying prostrate or lying flat (in death). (Source: Wendland 1998, p. 105)
Philip Noss (in The Bible Translator 1976, p. 100ff. ) explains the function of an ideophone: “The ideophone may be identified with onomatopoeia and other sound words frequently seen in French and English comic strips, but in [many] African languages it comprises a class of words with a very wide range of meaning and usage. They may function verbally, substantively, or in a modifying role similar to adverbs and adjectives. They describe anything that may be experienced: action, sound, color, quality, smell, or emotion. In oral literature they are used not only with great frequency but also with great creativity.”
Following are a number of back-translations as well as a sample translation for translators of Psalm 36:12:
Chichewa Contempary Chichewa translation, 2002/2016:
“Look how evildoers have lied down after falling,
throw them down, so they cannot be able to rise again.” (Source: Mawu a Mulungu mu Chichewa Chalero Back Translation)
Newari:
“Look! They have fallen.
Now they have fallen, never to rise again.” (Source: Newari Back Translation)
Hiligaynon:
“Those wicked men will- surely/[intensifier] -be-destroyed and will- no-longer -be-able-to-rise-up.” (Source: Hiligaynon Back Translation)
Eastern Bru:
“So, the people who do evil, they fall down, they fall down unable to get up again.” (Source: Bru Back Translation)
Laarim:
“I see bad people when they fall down,
they never get up again!” (Source: Laarim Back Translation)
Nyakyusa-Ngonde (back-translation into Swahili):
“Tazama ambavyo wameanguka watenda mabaya,
wameangushwa chini, hawawezi kusimama.” (Source: Nyakyusa Back Translation)
English:
“Look where evil people have fallen on the ground, defeated;
they were thrown down, and they will never rise again.” (Source: Translation for Translators)
In this closing verse the psalmist speaks of the future destruction of his enemies as something already accomplished. In a manner of speaking, he points to the fallen enemies and says, “There they lie” (see a similar statement in 14.5), defeated and dead, unable to rise. Since no definite place has been referred to, however, it is best to avoid saying There; something like Good News Translation “See,” or “Look at the evil men who have fallen…,” is best.
Quoted with permission from Bratcher, Robert G. and Reyburn, William D. A Handbook on the Book of Psalms. (UBS Helps for Translators). New York: UBS, 1991. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .
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