Following are a number of back-translations as well as a sample translation for translators of Psalm 30:6:
Chichewa Contempary Chichewa translation, 2002/2016:
“When I saw that I was safe I said,
‘I will not be shaken again.’” (Source: Mawu a Mulungu mu Chichewa Chalero Back Translation)
Newari:
“After I had already been saved I said –
‘No one can do anything to me now.” (Source: Newari Back Translation)
Hiligaynon:
“When my situation is strong/firm, I said that surely nothing/(no harm) will-happen to me.” (Source: Hiligaynon Back Translation)
Eastern Bru:
“When I have no troubles at all, then I say in my heart like this: "I don’t feel any anxiety at all."” (Source: Bru Back Translation)
Laarim:
“When I stayed well, I came I said that,
‘There will be no one who shakes me.’” (Source: Laarim Back Translation)
Nyakyusa-Ngonde (back-translation into Swahili):
“Wakati nimetulia,
nikasema, ‘Sitatikisika kamwe.’” (Source: Nyakyusa Back Translation)
English:
“As for me, when I had no troubles, I said to myself,
‘No one will defeat me!’” (Source: Translation for Translators)
The psalmist recalls his past, when in his ease he boasted of his success; but when Yahweh withdrew his presence, he felt afraid.
The word translated prosperity is found only here; it means quietness, ease. One may translate “when things went well”; New Jerusalem Bible “when I was untroubled”; New English Bible and New Jerusalem Bible have “Carefree”; both Good News Translation and Biblia Dios Habla Hoy translate “I felt secure.”
For verse 6b see the same statement in 10.6.
In verse 7a thy favor translates the same word that appears in verse 5b.
The exact meaning of the Hebrew in verse 7b is disputed, though the general sense of security is clear enough. New Jerusalem Bible has “Your favour, Yahweh, set me on unassailable heights”; New American Bible, following the Septuagint, “You had endowed me with majesty and strength”; another possible version is “you established strength for my mountain”; similarly An American Translation and Traduction œcuménique de la Bible.6-7 Hebrew Old Testament Text Project also takes the Masoretic text to mean “by your favor you had established strength for my mountain” (“B” decision). It is unclear what “my mountain” means in this context, and Hebrew Old Testament Text Project does not explain. Dahood has “by your favor you made me more stable than the mighty mountains”; New Jerusalem Bible “You … made [me] firm as a mighty mountain.” New English Bible, however, translates “it was thy will to shake my mountain refuge”; this, however, is quite improbable. Established me as a strong mountain will have little meaning where the highest hill is a barely-noticeable elevation of ground. In such areas it will be necessary to employ a different figure of strength or to avoid the use of the figure altogether; for example, “you protect me like a strong fortress” or “you are like a fortress and you protect me.”
For thou didst hide thy face, see comment at 13.1. It was the psalmist’s illness that caused him to conclude that Yahweh had forsaken him, and for this reason he was dismayed, that is, afraid (see the same verb, translated “terrify,” in 2.5).
Quoted with permission from Bratcher, Robert G. and Reyburn, William D. A Handbook on the Book of Psalms. (UBS Helps for Translators). New York: UBS, 1991. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .
John Wu Ching-hsiung (1899-1986) was a native of Ningbo, Zhejiang, a renowned jurist who studied in Europe and the United States, and served as a professor of law at Soochow University, as a judge and the Acting President of the Shanghai Provisional Court, and as the Vice President of the Commission for the Drafting of the Constitution of the Republic of China, before becoming the Minister of the Republic of China to the Holy See. Wu has written extensively, not only on law but also on Chinese philosophy, and has also written his autobiography, Beyond East and West, in English. Wu was a devout Catholic and had a personal relationship with Chiang Kai-shek (1887-1975). Wu began translating the the Psalms in 1938, and was encouraged by Chiang to translate the entire New Testament, which he corrected in his own handwriting. (…) John Wu Ching-hsiung’s translation of the Psalms (first draft in 1946, revised in 1975) was translated into Literary Chinese in the form of poetic rhyme, with attention paid to the style of writing. According to the content and mood of the different chapters of the original psalm, Wu chose Chinese poetic forms such as tetrameter, pentameter, heptameter [4, 5 or 7 syllables/Chinese characters per stanza], and the [less formal] Sao style, and sometimes more than two poetic forms were used in a single poem. (Source: Simon Wong)
John Wu Ching-hsiung himself talks about his celebrated and much-admired (though difficult-to-understand) translation in his aforementioned autobiography: (Click or tap here to see)
“Nothing could have been farther from my mind than to translate the Bible or any parts of it with a view to publishing it as an authorized version. I had rendered some of the Psalms into Chinese verse, but that was done as a part of my private devotion and as a literary hobby. When I was in Hongkong in 1938, I had come to know Madame H. H. Kung [Soong Ai-ling], and as she was deeply interested in the Bible, I gave her about a dozen pieces of my amateurish work just for her own enjoyment. What was my surprise when, the next time I saw her, she told me, “My sister [Soong Mei-ling] has written to say that the Generalissimo [Chiang Kai-shek] likes your translation of the Psalms very much, especially the first, the fifteenth, and the twenty-third, the Psalm of the Good Shepherd!”
“In the Autumn of 1940, when I was in Chungking, the Generalissimo invited me several times to lunch with him and expressed his appreciation of the few pieces that he had read. So I sent him some more. A few days later I received a letter from Madame Chiang [Soong Mei-ling], dated September 21, 1940, in which she said that they both liked my translation of the few Psalms I had sent them. ‘For many years,’ she wrote, ‘the Generalissimo has been wanting to have a really adequate and readable Wen-li (literary) translation of the Bible. He has never been able to find anyone who could undertake the matter.’ The letter ends up by saying that I should take up the job and that ‘the Generalissimo would gladly finance the undertaking of this work.’
“After some preliminary study of the commentaries, I started my work with the Psalms on January 6, 1943, the Feast of the Epiphany.
“I had three thousand years of Chinese literature to draw upon. The Chinese vocabulary for describing the beauties of nature is so rich that I seldom failed to find a word, a phrase, and sometimes even a whole line to fit the scene. But what makes such Psalms so unique is that they bring an intimate knowledge of the Creator to bear upon a loving observation of things of nature. I think one of the reasons why my translation is so well received by the Chinese scholars is that I have made the Psalms read like native poems written by a Chinese, who happens to be a Christian. Thus to my countrymen they are at once familiar and new — not so familiar as to be jejune, and not so new as to be bizarre. I did not publish it as a literal translation, but only as a paraphrase.
“To my greatest surprise, [my translation of the Psalms] sold like hot dogs. The popularity of that work was beyond my fondest dreams. Numberless papers and periodicals, irrespective of religion, published reviews too good to be true. I was very much tickled when I saw the opening verse of the first Psalm used as a headline on the front page of one of the non-religious dailies.”
A contemporary researcher (Lindblom 2021) mentions this about Wu’s translation: “Wu created a unique and personal work of sacred art that bears the imprint of his own admitted love and devotion, a landmark achievement comparable to Antoni Gaudi’s Basilica of the Sagrada Família in Barcelona, Spain. Although its use is still somewhat limited today, it continues to attract readers for the aforementioned qualities, and continues to be used in prayers and music by those who desire beauty and an authentic Chinese-sounding text that draws from China’s ancient traditions.”
The translation of Psalm 30 from the 1946 edition is in tetrameter and the rhyme schemes are -i and -u (the 1946 edition did not have verse numbers either):
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