complete verse (Psalm 28:4)

Following are a number of back-translations as well as a sample translation for translators of Psalm 28:4:

  • Chichewa Contempary Chichewa translation, 2002/2016:
    “Repay them because of their actions
    and their evil deeds;
    repay them because of what their hands have done
    and bring on them what they deserve.” (Source: Mawu a Mulungu mu Chichewa Chalero Back Translation)
  • Newari:
    “In accordance with their work and the evil deeds they have done
    please punish them,
    Pay them back for the work of their hands,
    and give them the punishment that [they] need give.” (Source: Newari Back Translation)
  • Hiligaynon:
    “Pay- them -back according-to their deeds.
    Punish them for their wicked doings.” (Source: Hiligaynon Back Translation)
  • Eastern Bru:
    “Request that you repay them according to the evil they have already done. And request that the hardship their hands have done will return to themselves.” (Source: Bru Back Translation)
  • Laarim:
    “You punish them because of their works
    and their bad matter,
    you beat them because of work which they did
    and you judge them because of their works.” (Source: Laarim Back Translation)
  • Nyakyusa-Ngonde (back-translation into Swahili):
    “Uwape kulingana na matendo yao,
    kufuatana na uovu wao.
    Kufuatana na matendo ambayo wamefanya uwalipe,
    uwarudishie kisasi ubaya wao.” (Source: Nyakyusa Back Translation)
  • English:
    “Punish those people in the way that they deserve for what they have done;
    punish them for their evil deeds.” (Source: Translation for Translators)

Japanese benefactives (mukuite)

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Like a number of other East Asian languages, Japanese uses a complex system of honorifics, i.e. a system where a number of different levels of politeness are expressed in language via words, word forms or grammatical constructs. These can range from addressing someone or referring to someone with contempt (very informal) to expressing the highest level of reference (as used in addressing or referring to God) or any number of levels in-between.

One way Japanese shows different degree of politeness is through the choice of a benefactive construction as shown here in the widely-used Japanese Shinkaiyaku (新改訳) Bible of 2017. Here, mukuite (報いて) or “reward/requite” is used in combination with kudasaru (くださる), a respectful form of the benefactive kureru (くれる). A benefactive reflects the good will of the giver or the gratitude of a recipient of the favor. To convey this connotation, English translation needs to employ a phrase such as “for me (my sake)” or “for you (your sake).”

(Source: S. E. Doi, see also S. E. Doi in Journal of Translation, 18/2022, p. 37ff. )

Japanese benefactives (hōfukushite)

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Like a number of other East Asian languages, Japanese uses a complex system of honorifics, i.e. a system where a number of different levels of politeness are expressed in language via words, word forms or grammatical constructs. These can range from addressing someone or referring to someone with contempt (very informal) to expressing the highest level of reference (as used in addressing or referring to God) or any number of levels in-between. One way Japanese shows different degree of politeness is through the choice of a benefactive construction as shown here in the widely-used Japanese Shinkaiyaku (新改訳) Bible of 2017.

Here, hōfukushite (報復して) or “repay” is used in combination with kudasaru (くださる), a respectful form of the benefactive kureru (くれる). A benefactive reflects the good will of the giver or the gratitude of a recipient of the favor. To convey this connotation, English translation needs to employ a phrase such as “for me (my sake)” or “for you (your sake).” (Source: S. E. Doi, see also S. E. Doi in Journal of Translation, 18/2022, p. 37ff. )

Translation commentary on Psalm 28:4

The petition for Yahweh to punish the wicked because of their evil deeds is stated in three different ways. Requite translates the Hebrew verb “give,” used twice (lines a and c); it means here “give back” or “reward” in a bad sense, and so “punish.” The verb translated render in line d is the causative of the verb “turn,” meaning “to cause to turn,” that is, “to pay back” (see Biblia Dios Habla Hoy) or “to give” (Good News Translation, New Jerusalem Bible, New English Bible). In lines a to c three different nouns are used for what these evildoers have done: their work … their deeds … the work of their hands, which are three different ways of referring to the same thing. The psalmist’s plea comes to a climax in line d; of the translations consulted in English, Good News Translation “give them what they deserve!” is the most natural expression. The psalmist is convinced of the evil nature of his enemies and that they rightly deserve the punishment he prays for them.

Line e contains no specific reference to the evil acts they have done. However, in some languages it will be necessary to be more specific. In such languages it is possible to say, for example, “Punish them for the bad deeds they have done to people.” Line b may then be rendered “and for the evil way they have lived.”

Quoted with permission from Bratcher, Robert G. and Reyburn, William D. A Handbook on the Book of Psalms. (UBS Helps for Translators). New York: UBS, 1991. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .

Psalm 28 as classical Chinese poetry

John Wu Ching-hsiung (1899-1986) was a native of Ningbo, Zhejiang, a renowned jurist who studied in Europe and the United States, and served as a professor of law at Soochow University, as a judge and the Acting President of the Shanghai Provisional Court, and as the Vice President of the Commission for the Drafting of the Constitution of the Republic of China, before becoming the Minister of the Republic of China to the Holy See. Wu has written extensively, not only on law but also on Chinese philosophy, and has also written his autobiography, Beyond East and West, in English. Wu was a devout Catholic and had a personal relationship with Chiang Kai-shek (1887-1975). Wu began translating the the Psalms in 1938, and was encouraged by Chiang to translate the entire New Testament, which he corrected in his own handwriting. (…) John Wu Ching-hsiung’s translation of the Psalms (first draft in 1946, revised in 1975) was translated into Literary Chinese in the form of poetic rhyme, with attention paid to the style of writing. According to the content and mood of the different chapters of the original psalm, Wu chose Chinese poetic forms such as tetrameter, pentameter, heptameter [4, 5 or 7 syllables/Chinese characters per stanza], and the [less formal] Sao style, and sometimes more than two poetic forms were used in a single poem. (Source: Simon Wong)

John Wu Ching-hsiung himself talks about his celebrated and much-admired (though difficult-to-understand) translation in his aforementioned autobiography: (Click or tap here to see)

“Nothing could have been farther from my mind than to translate the Bible or any parts of it with a view to publishing it as an authorized version. I had rendered some of the Psalms into Chinese verse, but that was done as a part of my private devotion and as a literary hobby. When I was in Hongkong in 1938, I had come to know Madame H. H. Kung [Soong Ai-ling], and as she was deeply interested in the Bible, I gave her about a dozen pieces of my amateurish work just for her own enjoyment. What was my surprise when, the next time I saw her, she told me, “My sister [Soong Mei-ling] has written to say that the Generalissimo [Chiang Kai-shek] likes your translation of the Psalms very much, especially the first, the fifteenth, and the twenty-third, the Psalm of the Good Shepherd!”

“In the Autumn of 1940, when I was in Chungking, the Generalissimo invited me several times to lunch with him and expressed his appreciation of the few pieces that he had read. So I sent him some more. A few days later I received a letter from Madame Chiang [Soong Mei-ling], dated September 21, 1940, in which she said that they both liked my translation of the few Psalms I had sent them. ‘For many years,’ she wrote, ‘the Generalissimo has been wanting to have a really adequate and readable Wen-li (literary) translation of the Bible. He has never been able to find anyone who could undertake the matter.’ The letter ends up by saying that I should take up the job and that ‘the Generalissimo would gladly finance the undertaking of this work.’

“After some preliminary study of the commentaries, I started my work with the Psalms on January 6, 1943, the Feast of the Epiphany.

“I had three thousand years of Chinese literature to draw upon. The Chinese vocabulary for describing the beauties of nature is so rich that I seldom failed to find a word, a phrase, and sometimes even a whole line to fit the scene. But what makes such Psalms so unique is that they bring an intimate knowledge of the Creator to bear upon a loving observation of things of nature. I think one of the reasons why my translation is so well received by the Chinese scholars is that I have made the Psalms read like native poems written by a Chinese, who happens to be a Christian. Thus to my countrymen they are at once familiar and new — not so familiar as to be jejune, and not so new as to be bizarre. I did not publish it as a literal translation, but only as a paraphrase.

“To my greatest surprise, [my translation of the Psalms] sold like hot dogs. The popularity of that work was beyond my fondest dreams. Numberless papers and periodicals, irrespective of religion, published reviews too good to be true. I was very much tickled when I saw the opening verse of the first Psalm used as a headline on the front page of one of the non-religious dailies.”

A contemporary researcher (Lindblom 2021) mentions this about Wu’s translation: “Wu created a unique and personal work of sacred art that bears the imprint of his own admitted love and devotion, a landmark achievement comparable to Antoni Gaudi’s Basilica of the Sagrada Família in Barcelona, Spain. Although its use is still somewhat limited today, it continues to attract readers for the aforementioned qualities, and continues to be used in prayers and music by those who desire beauty and an authentic Chinese-sounding text that draws from China’s ancient traditions.”

The translation of Psalm 28 from the 1946 edition is in pentameter and the rhyme schemes are -ong and -i (the 1946 edition did not have verse numbers either):

口蜜腹劍

呼籲我恩保。莫向我作聾。爾若長默默。我將陷泥中。 主盍一垂顧。鑒我耿耿忠。向主發哀聲。舉手朝聖宮。 莫將我消滅。使與群兇同。彼輩口如蜜。心中含辛螫。 祈主按其行。報彼諸罪孽。自作應自受。處以所應得。 目中無眞宰。藐視靈異蹟。既為主所否。何由自建立。 可讚惟雅瑋。已聞吾歎息。 是我衛身干。是我生命力。一心惟賴主。賴主信有益。神樂湧心府。頌聲從中發。 祈保受命王。萬民食帝力。 拯救爾子民。福佑爾嗣業。長為元元牧。涵育靡有極。

Transcription into Roman alphabet with the rhyme scheme highlighted:

kǒu mì fù jiàn

hū xū wǒ ēn bǎo 。 mò xiàng wǒ zuò lóng 。 ěr ruò cháng mò mò 。 wǒ jiāng xiàn ní zhōng 。 zhǔ hé yī chuí gù 。 jiàn wǒ gěng gěng zhōng 。 xiàng zhǔ fā āi shēng 。 jǔ shǒu zhāo shèng gōng 。 mò jiāng wǒ xiāo miè 。 shǐ yǔ qún xiōng tóng 。 bǐ bèi kǒu rú mì 。 xīn zhōng hán xīn shì 。 qí zhǔ àn qí xíng 。 bào bǐ zhū zuì niè 。 zì zuò yīng zì shòu 。 chǔ yǐ suǒ yīng dé 。 mù zhōng wú zhēn zǎi 。 miǎo shì líng yì 。 jì wéi zhǔ suǒ fǒu 。 hé yóu zì jiàn 。 kě zàn wéi yǎ wěi 。 yǐ wén wú tàn 。 shì wǒ wèi shēn gān 。 shì wǒ shēng mìng 。 yī xīn wéi lài zhǔ 。 lài zhǔ xìn yǒu 。 shén lè yǒng xīn fǔ 。 sòng shēng cóng zhōng fā 。 qí bǎo shòu mìng wáng 。 wàn mín shí dì lì 。 zhěng jiù ěr zǐ mín 。 fú yòu ěr sì yè 。 cháng wéi yuán yuán mù 。 hán yù mí yǒu jí 。

With thanks to Simon Wong.