sin

The Hebrew and Greek that is typically translated as “sin” in English has a wide variety of translations.

The Greek ἁμαρτάνω (hamartanō) carries the original verbatim meaning of “miss the mark” and likewise, many translations contain the “connotation of moral responsibility.”

  • Loma: “leaving the road” (which “implies a definite standard, the transgression of which is sin”)
  • Navajo (Dinė): “that which is off to the side” (source for this and above: Bratcher / Nida)
  • Toraja-Sa’dan: kasalan, originally meaning “transgression of a religious or moral rule” and in the context of the Bible “transgression of God’s commandments” (source: H. van der Veen in The Bible Translator 1950, p. 21ff. )
  • Kaingang: “break God’s word”
  • Bariai: “bad behavior” (source: Bariai Back Translation)
  • Sandawe: “miss the mark” (like the original meaning of the Greek term) (source for this and above: Ursula Wiesemann in Holzhausen / Riderer 2010, p. 36ff., 43)

In Shipibo-Conibo the term is hocha. Nida (1952, p. 149) tells the story of its choosing: “In some instances a native expression for sin includes many connotations, and its full meaning must be completely understood before one ever attempts to use it. This was true, for example, of the term hocha first proposed by Shipibo-Conibo natives as an equivalent for ‘sin.’ The term seemed quite all right until one day the translator heard a girl say after having broken a little pottery jar that she was guilty of ‘hocha.’ Breaking such a little jar scarcely seemed to be sin. However, the Shipibos insisted that hocha was really sin, and they explained more fully the meaning of the word. It could be used of breaking a jar, but only if the jar belonged to someone else. Hocha was nothing more nor less than destroying the possessions of another, but the meaning did not stop with purely material possessions. In their belief God owns the world and all that is in it. Anyone who destroys the work and plan of God is guilty of hocha. Hence the murderer is of all men most guilty of hocha, for he has destroyed God’s most important possession in the world, namely, man. Any destructive and malevolent spirit is hocha, for it is antagonistic and harmful to God’s creation. Rather than being a feeble word for some accidental event, this word for sin turned out to be exceedingly rich in meaning and laid a foundation for the full presentation of the redemptive act of God.”

In Warao it is translated as “bad obojona.” Obojona is a term that “includes the concepts of consciousness, will, attitude, attention and a few other miscellaneous notions.” (Source: Henry Osborn in The Bible Translator 1969, p. 74ff. ). See other occurrences of Obojona in the Warao New Testament.

Martin Ehrensvärd, one of the translators for the Danish Bibelen 2020, comments on the translation of this term: “We would explain terms, such that e.g. sin often became ‘doing what God does not want’ or ‘breaking God’s law’, ‘letting God down’, ‘disrespecting God’, ‘doing evil’, ‘acting stupidly’, ‘becoming guilty’. Now why couldn’t we just use the word sin? Well, sin in contemporary Danish, outside of the church, is mostly used about things such as delicious but unhealthy foods. Exquisite cakes and chocolates are what a sin is today.” (Source: Ehrensvärd in HIPHIL Novum 8/2023, p. 81ff. )

See also sinner.

complete verse (Jeremiah 15:13)

Following are a number of back-translations as well as a sample translation for translators of Jeremiah 15:13:

  • Kupsabiny: “God is saying to people,
    ‘I shall give out your (plur.) riches/wealth and the things you have heaped up
    for the enemies to take for themselves in an easy way.
    I am doing like that because of all your sins
    that you have been going around doing in the whole land.” (Source: Kupsabiny Back Translation)
  • Hiligaynon: “Your (plur.) wealth and properties I will-cause-to-be-plundered by the enemies because of all your (plur.) sins that you (plur.) have-done in the whole nation.” (Source: Hiligaynon Back Translation)
  • English: “I will give all the valuable possessions of the people of Judah to their enemies,
    without them paying for it.
    Their valuable possessions will be the payment/reward that I will give them
    because of all the sins that you have committed throughout your country.” (Source: Translation for Translators)

1st person pronoun referring to God (Japanese)

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Like a number of other East Asian languages, Japanese uses a complex system of honorifics, i.e. a system where a number of different levels of politeness are expressed in language via words, word forms or grammatical constructs. These can range from addressing someone or referring to someone with contempt (very informal) to expressing the highest level of reference (as used in addressing or referring to God) or any number of levels in-between.

One way Japanese shows different degree of politeness is through the choice of a first person singular and plural pronoun (“I” and “we” and its various forms) as shown here in the widely-used Japanese Shinkaiyaku (新改訳) Bible of 2017. The most commonly used watashi/watakushi (私) is typically used when the speaker is humble and asking for help. In these verses, where God / Jesus is referring to himself, watashi is also used but instead of the kanji writing system (私) the syllabary hiragana (わたし) is used to distinguish God from others.

(Source: S. E. Doi, see also S. E. Doi in Journal of Translation, 18/2022, p. 37ff. )

See also pronoun for “God”.

Translation commentary on Jeremiah 15:13

Verses 13-14 (spoken by the LORD) are assumed by many scholars to interrupt the flow of the dialogue between Jeremiah and the LORD. The assumption is that in these verses the LORD now addresses the people rather than Jeremiah, although the second person singular masculine form of address is used. Accordingly, the two verses are dropped from Moffatt and New English Bible (but not Revised English Bible). New American Bible also omits verse 12 on the assumption that it is an accidental repetition from 17.1, while verses 13-14 are omitted on the grounds that they may be an accidental repetition of 17.3-4. However, we do not recommend any deletion here.

Old Testament scholarship is in agreement that the LORD is the speaker, and so Good News Translation clearly marks the text here that way: “The LORD said to me.” Die Bibel im heutigen Deutsch introduces the LORD as speaker before verse 12, and then allows verses 13-14 to be the continuation of his message.

Your (verse 13) … you (verse 14) are masculine singular pronouns, but they may be taken in a collective sense of the entire nation. This is the basis for Die Bibel im heutigen Deutsch “People of Judah, your [plural] … you [plural]” and Good News Translation “my people … them … they”.

Some languages will not make a distinction between wealth and treasures. Essentially they are synonymous here and translators can collapse them into one word if necessary.

I will give as spoil is spelled out in more detail by Good News Translation: “I will send enemies to carry away….” (It is stated clearly in the next verse that their enemies are the ones who will be given the spoil.)

Without price: The Septuagint omits the negative without, thus resulting in the meaning “This is the reward for all the evil…” (Die Bibel im heutigen Deutsch; similarly Good News Translation, Traduction œcuménique de la Bible, Luther 1984, An American Translation), which is also the preference of Hebrew Old Testament Text Project. Translators can say “This is the price you will pay….”

In some languages a more readable rendering for the whole verse is:

• I will give your enemies [or, I will give other nations] your wealth and treasure. That is the price you will pay for all the sins you have committed throughout the land.

Quoted with permission from Newman, Barclay M. and Stine, Philip C. A Handbook on Jeremiah. (UBS Helps for Translators). New York: UBS, 2003. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .