28His eldest brother Eliab heard him talking to the men, and Eliab’s anger was kindled against David. He said, “Why have you come down? With whom have you left those few sheep in the wilderness? I know your presumption and the evil of your heart, for you have come down just to see the battle.”
The Hebrew, Greek and Latin that is translated as “(was or became) angry” in English is translated in Kwere as “saw anger.” In Kwere, emotions are always paired with sensory verbs (seeing or smelling or hearing). (Source: Pioneer Bible Translators, project-specific translation notes in Paratext)
In Bariai it is “to have grumbling interiors” (source: Bariai Back Translation).
Low German translation by Johannes Jessen, publ. 1933, republ. 2006: “steppe”
Yakan: “the lonely place” (source: Yakan Back Translation)
Western Bukidnon Manobo: “a land where no people lived” (source: Western Bukidnon Manobo Back Translation)
Kankanaey: “the place with no inhabitants” (source: Kankanaey Back Translation)
Matumbi uses various term: lubele (desert, sandy place without water) — used in John 11:54, lupu’ngu’ti (a place where no people live, can be a scrub land, a forest, or a savanna) — used in Mark 1:3 et al.), and mwitu (a forest, a place where wild animals live) — used in Mark 1:13 et al.) (Source: Pioneer Bible Translators, project-specific notes in Paratext)
Chichewa Contemporary translation (2002/2016): chipululu: a place uninhabited by people with thick forest and bush (source: Mawu a Mulungu mu Chichewa Chalero Back Translation)
Note that in Luke 15:4, usually a term is used that denotes pastoral land, such as “eating/grazing-place” in Tagbanwa (source: Tagbanwa Back Translation).
“Sheep are known throughout most of the world, even though, as in Central Africa, they are a far cry from the fleecy wool-producing animals of colder climates. Where such animals are known, even by seemingly strange names, e.g. ‘cotton deer’ (Yucateco) or ‘woolly goat’ (Inupiaq), such names should be used. In some instances, one may wish to borrow a name and use a classifier, e.g. ‘an animal called sheep’. In still other instances translators have used ‘animal which produces wool’, for though people are not acquainted with the animals they are familiar with wool.” (Source: Bratcher / Nida)
In Dëne Súline, it is usually translated as “an evil little caribou.” To avoid the negative connotation, a loan word from the neighboring South Slavey was used. (Source: NCEM, p. 70)
Note that the often-alleged Inuktitut translation of “sheep” with “seal” is an urban myth (source Nida 1947, p. 136).
The Hebrew, Latin and Greek that is translated as “anger” or similar in English in this verse is translated with a variety of solutions (Bratcher / Nida says: “Since anger has so many manifestations and seems to affect so many aspects of personality, it is not strange that expressions used to describe this emotional response are so varied”).
Chichewa: “have a burning heart” (source: Mawu a Mulungu mu Chichewa Chalero Back Translation) (see also anger burned in him)
Citak: two different terms, one meaning “angry” and one meaning “offended,” both are actually descriptions of facial expressions. The former can be represented by an angry stretching of the eyes or by an angry frown. The latter is similarly expressed by an offended type of frown with one’s head lowered. (Source: Graham Ogden)
In Akan, a number of metaphors are used, most importantly abufuo, lit. “weedy chest” (the chest is seen as a container that contains the heart but can also metaphorically be filled with other fluids etc.), but also abufuhyeε lit. “hot/burning weedy chest” and anibereε, lit. “reddened eyes.” (Source: Gladys Nyarko Ansah in Kövecses / Benczes / Szelid 2024, p. 21ff.)
Following are a number of back-translations as well as a sample translation for translators of 1 Samuel 17:28:
Kupsabiny: “But when Eliab his elder brother heard David speaking with the people, he became angry/annoyed and told David that, ‘You came here for what? You left the sheep in the field/wilderness with who? I know you like playing a lot and there is no one who trusts you. You have only come to see how the battle is.’” (Source: Kupsabiny Back Translation)
Newari: “David’s eldest brother Eliab heard his younger brother talking with people like that. And, expressing his anger with David, he said, "Why have you come down here? In coming, whom did you cause to look after the sheep in the wilderness? "I know your pride and deceit. You like to see just the battle!"” (Source: Newari Back Translation)
Hiligaynon: “When Eliab heard, the oldest sibling/(brother) of David, that he was-talking-together with the people, he (was) very angry. He said to David, ‘ Why have- you (sing.) -come here? Who have- you (sing.) had-to-watch-over our (incl.) sheep in the desolate-place which (are) just a few in-number/[lit. pieces]? Maybe you (sing.) are-thinking that you (sing.) are really somebody. Your (sing.) character is bad! You (sing.) came here just to-watch the battle.’” (Source: Hiligaynon Back Translation)
English: “But when David’s oldest brother Eliab heard David talking to the men, he was angry. He said to David, ‘Why have you come down here? Is someone taking care of those few sheep that you left in the desert? I know you are just a smart-aleck/brat! You just want to watch the battle!’” (Source: Translation for Translators)
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Like a number of other East Asian languages, Japanese uses a complex system of honorifics, i.e. a system where a number of different levels of politeness are expressed in language via words, word forms or grammatical constructs. These can range from addressing someone or referring to someone with contempt (very informal) to expressing the highest level of reference (as used in addressing or referring to God) or any number of levels in-between. One way Japanese shows different degree of politeness is through the choice of a second person pronoun (“you” and its various forms) as shown here in the widely-used Japanese Shinkaiyaku (新改訳) Bible of 2017. The most commonly used anata (あなた) is typically used when the speaker is humbly addressing another person.
In these verses, however, omae (おまえ) is used, a cruder second person pronoun, that Jesus for instance chooses when chiding his disciples. (Source: S. E. Doi, see also S. E. Doi in Journal of Translation, 18/2022, p. 37ff. )
David’s oldest brother Eliab was introduced in verse 13 above. He becomes upset with his younger brother for getting involved in the business of the older men.
Anger was kindled: see the comments on 11.6.
Few sheep: for some unknown reason Good News Translation has omitted the word few, which is clearly present in the Hebrew and should be retained in translation.
The wilderness: this word, often translated “desert” (New International Version, New American Bible, and New Jerusalem Bible), may refer to dry, barren country, but it may also refer to land used for pasture rather than for farming, as in Psa 65.13.
I know your presumption: the word translated presumption is elsewhere translated “pride” (Pro 11.2; Jer 49.16) and “insolence” (Pro 13.10). Languages have a wide variety of ways of expressing this idea. There is even a difference between British and American English in the translation of this verse. The British edition of Good News Translation has “you cheeky brat” where the American edition says “you smart aleck.” Contemporary English Version has “You spoiled brat,” while New International Version says “I know how conceited you are.” Translators should feel free to use whatever wording they would commonly use to express the insolence of a young person in the presence of his elders.
Several translations combine the expression your presumption and the evil of your heart into a single phrase. Good News Translation says “You smart aleck” (or, in the British edition of Good News Translation, “you cheeky brat”), and Revised English Bible reads “you impudent young rascal.” If translators keep both expressions, other ways of expressing the second include “your evil intentions” (Traduction œcuménique de la Bible) or “what wicked things you have in mind.”
Quoted with permission from Omanson, Roger L. and Ellington, John E. A Handbook on the First and Second Books of Samuel, Volume 1. (UBS Helps for Translators). New York: UBS, 2001. For this and other handbooks for translators see here .
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