Translation commentary on 1 Maccabees 5:58

And they issued orders to the men of the forces that were with them, and they marched against Jamnia: The town of Jamnia was mentioned in 1Macc 4.15 (see the comments there). Good News Bible is a bit too condensed for this verse. Better models are:

• So they gave orders to their army, and then they all set out to attack Jamnia.

• So Azariah and Joseph ordered their soldiers to attack the town of Jamnia, and they set out to do so.

Quoted with permission from Bullard, Roger A. and Hatton, Howard A. A Handbook on 1-2 Maccabees. (UBS Helps for Translators). New York: UBS, 2011. For this and other handbooks for translators see here.